Pitch Feedback

Our whole class agreed that our film should fall under the genre of Romantic Comedy and that it should be aimed mainly at a female audience, however there was some deliberation over what age the target audience should be and underneath I have created a pie chart to illustrate the outcomes. As you can see the over riding vote lies with the ages of 13-19, this is the exact age we were planning on aiming our film at and our class affirmed this idea for us.

Positives
Well thought out characters
Would attract a large audience as many people enjoy the genre/type of film
Well planned out pitch
Very easy to understand and will be very easy to watch, this will attract many people
Love the location choices and think there realistic but at the same time totally contrasting
Been influenced by many different shows and characters (intertexuality) this shows it has been well thought about

Potential Problems
It will be hard to use cross cut editing
Continuity may be an issue, for example the weather will need to be consistent
Could be made more original as there is already a lot of films out that are similar to this
Having to change location constantly may be hard due to weather and it will take up a lot of time
The editing will have to be very slick for it to have its desired effect
You will have to make it overly clear the difference between characters as the audience may get confused easily.

This feedback proved extremely useful, we are going to take all of these positives and potential problems and reassess some of our ideas so that non of the issues raised above will be solved.